Ember in the Ashes, An
The beginning started off with a bang but then I feel like by 25%, things still haven't panned out. The characters feel very one-dimensional. The world feels unoriginal -- sort of like a mash-up of several different dystopian worlds and plots all thrown into a Roman-type feel. The narration isn't reeling me in at all. And what's sad is that I'm listening to two of my favorite narrators who I was convinced I could listen to if they were just reading the phone book but apparently that's not true since I have no motivation to listen to them read this story.
Aside from the feeling like this has all been done before, it also feels so forced. Oh yay, a convenient prophecy that happens to be there. With very specific yet cryptic clues. It just doesn't feel like it's working for me.
But do I DNF? So many people have LOVED it... But some friends have also put it down or rated it 3 or even 2 stars. Maybe I'll join the black sheep club (or will it pan out to be a more even distribution once more reviews come in?) but for now, it's on hold until I decide if I want to continue or not. I do have my ARC that I got from ALAMW so I was wondering if I'd like it better in print but I just don't feel like picking it up. I have no interest in seeing where the story goes at the moment (usually a DNF sign) so we'll see if I have the urge to come back to it in a little bit.
Very fun, action packed YA series. Don't be fooled by the cheesy cover. Fun read.
Docking off a star because the constant threat of sexual violence against women was grating, and I don't remember there being an explanation for why only one woman can join the military academy. What is the logic behind this rule? To make that threat of rape a sure reality?
Laia is a young woman living in an oppressive Empire. Her brother has just been kidnapped and her grandparents murdered by the Empire. Darrin is all she has left and she will do anything to get him back. So ends up being dragged into a power struggle both within the Empire and the rebellion it sparked.
Meanwhile, Elias is an elite assassin of the Empire who can't WAIT to escape. He's almost a graduate, which means he'll be free to flee anywhere. But lo and behold, the fates do not have such an easy escape before him. Instead, he'll have to fight to compete for a place as Emperor, testing his strength, his loyalty, his endurance, his emotions. The stories of Elias and Laia are told in alternating views (which I typically hate but understood why it had to be used here) as we watch the struggle and warring factions using violence, deceit, intrigue, and more.
It kept me going. What would happen next, the cliffhangers at the end of each alternating chapter (which was not too hokey), whether each character would get what they achieved. But as I read the final words of the book I realized it really wasn't as good as I thought it was.
Despite the violence described in the book (which honestly bored me), rape is never actually depicted. I didn't want to actually read about any of characters being raped, but I found it odd that the author constantly skittered along that line several times within the book but didn't actually cross it. For a world that is filled with such physical violence towards anyone and everyone, male and female, adult and child, I felt the author seemed to not want to go there, which was strange.
I'm not entirely sure I understand how the Empire works. There's an emperor, his family has ruled for like forever but there's trouble. But beyond the school Elias is from, the Resistance, etc. I'm not sure what are the structures or chains of command or how the society functions. Although we the reader can heavily draw upon real world similarities, it would have been nice if we had a little more world-building.
The characters are somewhat empty. At first I was somewhat impressed that the love web tangled wasn't THE driving force of the book, but the problem is that we don't know WHY several of the characters do what they do. There's a big love reveal towards the end of the book that seemed to undo the character development and still never answered the "why". The Big Baddie (maybe?) has a discussion with her offspring about why she abandoned him, but the reasoning fell flat to me.
I think the major problem is that this is clearly not a standalone novel. That there are some unanswered questions is acceptable (such as the parentage issue from above). That the MAIN PLOT is really not resolved is not. I feel like that the sequels are meant to get progressively darker and we'll see more of the world of Laia and Elias painted in more detail.
But it's hard for me to shake the feeling that I got somewhat hoodwinked. I'm fine (and prefer) waiting for the entire series of books to be released so I can binge-read, but being led to think it's a standalone isn't cool. I prefer to go into a book without reading too many reviews or author interviews so I don't bring in biases or expectations, which is probably partially why I'm so unhappy. A quick Google search shows there are people clamoring for sequels and agreeing this isn't a one-off sort of title.
It was good as I was reading it, but upon reflection I'm not sure it's worth the the hype and I'm not sure it's good enough to make me eager to want to wait year(s) for a sequel.
This was my second time reading this book. I reread it to get me ready for the second book in the series"A Torch Against The Night". I really loved reading "An Ember In The Ashes" by Sabaa Tahir this is her debut novel.
Amazing! Breath taking. Heart breaking! The character growth was solid, along with the story. There was never a point when I was bored. I was angry, I was happy, I cried, I thought and I felt while reading this book. Again... Amazing.